Very excited to see where this goes! I agree that it's a bit slow paced, but you'll get better with experience. Keep at it!

Very cool so far! I can't wait to see more!

I think it's great! Not worth docking you points, but perhaps there could be a way to blend between the black and grey lines, because it's a little abrupt once I saw where the black ended and the grey began, but I had to look for it to really see it. Otherwise great job!

Very well done!